And see, here's the thing. . .

Anybody interested in reading a somewhat finished long-ish (20-ish pages) fic and letting me know if I'm getting my point across? Not so much a spit and polish beta with grammar and spelling and what not, but a read-and-feedback dealie, where I can maybe ask you so questions about what you thought about characterization?

I'd be more than willing to do the same for you.

Hell, I'd do whatever you wanted.

( Interested? At all? Anyone? Bueller? )