And see, here's the thing. . .

[elly427]

Anybody interested in reading a somewhat finished long-ish (20-ish pages) fic and letting me know if I'm getting my point across? Not so much a spit and polish beta with grammar and spelling and what not, but a read-and-feedback dealie, where I can maybe ask you so questions about what you thought about characterization?

I'd be more than willing to do the same for you.

Hell, I'd do whatever you wanted.



Anyway, for the interested, it's a post LCII thing spanning about fuve years after the ep itself. Lots of Sam/Pete. Like, Sam/Pete in a serious relationship. And it's not that it exactly ends up Sam/Jack, but it kinda does. No Sam/Pete by the end, at least. Rated PG. And around 20 pages at 10pt in word.

I'm at the point where I'm writing pieces to add to it that don't really fit because I can't tell if I'm getting the point that I want to across. So. Yeah.

I make it sound reeeeally fun, eh? Anyway, thanks for considering.

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[poohmusings.livejournal.com]

If you're still looking for another person, I'd *love* to. :) poohmusings[at]yahoo[dot]com. (I swear I'm much better at betas than sending feedback. Speaking of which, I still owe you tons. You'll probably get it ... in 30 years or so. *g*)

[elly427.livejournal.com]

Dude, this clears you of any need for feedback, ever. Seriously. It's in the (e)mail. You're a peach.