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[elly427]

And here it is, barring any huge changes which may come down the pipe.

Concessions
Author: elly427
Summary: He knows the way this started, in the middle of grief and loss and anger, doesn't bode well for a future, for any of them.
Classifications: Sam/Jack/Daniel, R/NC-17. Set at some future point
Disclaimer: Not mine. Thanks for bring it up.
Author's notes Thanks to splash_the_cat and nandamai for being my first betas, for dealing with my massive pronoun issues and being all-round nice people who made this much better than it was. You’re both peaches. All poor judgment and any mistakes are my own.

And to woodface, because apparently she trusts me with the OTP.


A warning for the S/J diehards: this may not be the fic for you, though I don't think it's too bad. We'll see, I guess.

Comments

[woodface]

Hee, okay I read and I didn't run away so that must say something ;o)

Must say that the beginning left me feeling a bit awkward but I got back on my feet when I found the ship. D/J just will never make sense to me but it seemed to work somehow.

And how can they understand it when he's not sure he does - this strange mix of him and her and Jack - when he's not sure how it happened, not sure if he joined Sam and Jack or she joined them. Daniel sometimes wonders if this is just Jack's way of taking care of his team and while he knows this situation is fucked up, he hopes it isn't that fucked up.

I really loved this paragraph, I think it made it all work for me.

Nice work, hon. Must say that this is the first threesome that I read that made sense because it doesn't make sense. *g*

Whoops, forgot to say

[woodface]

And to woodface, because apparently she trusts me with the OTP.

Thank you, I feel honoured *beams*

*knuffels*

Re: Whoops, forgot to say

[elly427.livejournal.com]

You're welcome. You're the one who held comments hostage until this was posted. :P

Re: Whoops, forgot to say

[woodface]

*snickers* Well might have had something to do with having to work on a Middle Dutch text as well ;o)

Re: Whoops, forgot to say

[elly427.livejournal.com]

Meh. You act like this thesis is *important* to you or something. Pffbbtt.

[woodface]

Well you know, five years of going to uni now. I'd love to get that diploma so I know I didn't do it for nothing ;o)

[elly427.livejournal.com]

pfffbttt. I like that sound. Pffbbtt. That's what four years of uni's taught *me* so far, so five seems good. Enjoy your dutch.

[woodface]

Well I had to redo some subjects of my first year, otherwise I'd have my diploma already. Gah! *glares at prof who failed her*

And thanks =oP

[elly427.livejournal.com]

Hee, okay I read and I didn't run away so that must say something ;o)

Yay? :P

D/J just will never make sense to me but it seemed to work somehow.

It only works from a Daniel perspective for me. Which I think might say a lot. Ahem.

Must say that this is the first threesome that I read that made sense because it doesn't make sense. *g*

Bwhaha. Shh. Don't tell. otp, baybee, otp. :D

[woodface]

It only works from a Daniel perspective for me. Which I think might say a lot. Ahem.

It does! I once started writing a Sam/Daniel fic from Daniel's pov (don't worry it was unrequited). But then I realised that I just can't think like Daniel so I gave up.

Bwhaha. Shh. Don't tell. otp, baybee, otp. :D

*snickers* Will your next fic be the OTP? ;o)

[elly427.livejournal.com]

*snickers* Will your next fic be the OTP? ;o)

My muse willing. And oh, she'll be willing alright.
:P

[woodface]

Yaaaaaaay!

[elly427.livejournal.com]

Shhhhh! She'll hear you an insist I write Hammond/Teal'c or something.

Wait. That sounds cool . . . :P

[woodface]

I meant Sam/Jack. Somehow I'm pretty sure of that ;o)