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[elly427]

And here it is, barring any huge changes which may come down the pipe.

Concessions
Author: elly427
Summary: He knows the way this started, in the middle of grief and loss and anger, doesn't bode well for a future, for any of them.
Classifications: Sam/Jack/Daniel, R/NC-17. Set at some future point
Disclaimer: Not mine. Thanks for bring it up.
Author's notes Thanks to splash_the_cat and nandamai for being my first betas, for dealing with my massive pronoun issues and being all-round nice people who made this much better than it was. You’re both peaches. All poor judgment and any mistakes are my own.

And to woodface, because apparently she trusts me with the OTP.


A warning for the S/J diehards: this may not be the fic for you, though I don't think it's too bad. We'll see, I guess.

Comments

[callista1159.livejournal.com]

That's very, very (very) hot.

:0

I'm not usually a fan of anything but my OTP and messing with that is a dangerous game, but this was cool because I could think 'Poor Daniel. Hehe.' and it's there in the fic, too ;)

I heard a lot of canon-Daniel in this (in the attitude, I mean) so I think it was very well done.

I love Daniel's worries ("Daniel sometimes wonders if this is just Jack's way of taking care of his team and while he knows this situation is fucked up, he hopes it isn't that fucked up." ) and the way he found out about them. It's a peculiar, fucked up little idea, but it works.

Everything Jara said in her post - you've done everything right, from my S/J shippy point of view. Yey :P

Wonderful piece! *Knuffels*

[elly427.livejournal.com]

I'm not usually a fan of anything but my OTP and messing with that is a dangerous game,

I don't like messing with the otp. :)

I heard a lot of canon-Daniel in this (in the attitude, I mean) so I think it was very well done.

Thank you. I don't particularily like Daniel all that much (don't tell anyone), so that's really nice to hear.

you've done everything right, from my S/J shippy point of view. Yey :P

I think the world needs more shippy S/J/D. But that's just me.

*Knuffels*

*feels warm and cuddly and knuffled* :) Thanks for the comments.

[isis6.livejournal.com]

I think the world needs more shippy S/J/D
Me! Me! Me! I've got one on the boil, so to speak.

And I really like this. You always write well anyway, and this has got that post Apocalyptic feel that I love, along with the sense that away from everything they've known just about anything is possible.

[elly427.livejournal.com]

Me! Me! Me! I've got one on the boil, so to speak.

Yay! I'm still not sure if I could ever buy this threesome on the screen but man do I like reading good fic about it, and heaven knows your will be good!

And I really like this.

Thank you.

the sense that away from everything they've known just about anything is possible.

I don't know if that was intentional, but yeah. That was part of what I was going for. They're not *normal* by any stretch of the imagination, and I'd imagine their mental health leaves a lot to be desired, so if anyone would think this sort of crazy scenario might just work, it's these three.

I'm now really looking forward to your S/J/D. Wheeeee!

[isis6.livejournal.com]

I'm now really looking forward to your S/J/D.

Eeek! Well, I keep leaving it, and then going back. Making it work is really hard, for much the same reasons as yours. I need to get the right feel, the sense that, given a certain situation, it could happen. I'm not going to give the dynamics of the relationship away, but it's not quite the same as yours.

have you read mayaan's "System of a Down"? It's sort of slashy, but worth a read, I think. Her "The Hanged Man" is good as well (if you can cope with Jack being all alpha over Daniel), and she keeps Sam in the picture as well.

http://the-janissary.com/Fiction/SystemOfADown.html